tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post8897302460927879651..comments2023-05-11T09:40:38.634-05:00Comments on Writings: Flash Fiction Interlude: Madness of Allies A Will and Diana AdventureAnn (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-15365424574148234462007-11-07T11:59:00.000-06:002007-11-07T11:59:00.000-06:00Good Lord, BG! Way to creep me out. My only nit wo...Good Lord, BG! Way to creep me out. My only nit would be that I wish it were a smidge longer so the Magister and guard might be fleshed out a bit. I know we were limited as to length for the FC, but it's something to ponder maybe?<BR/><BR/>Fascinating world you've created, btw, if I haven't mentioned so before.Virginia Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10493643681622551814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-87233823560167856872007-11-06T19:02:00.000-06:002007-11-06T19:02:00.000-06:00An excellent read. Since this is one of a few of ...An excellent read. Since this is one of a few of your posts that I have read, it seems that this section is part of a larger story, or that's what I got from the introduction. I like your writing style and this was definately an excellent piece.Kate Boddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07563671242585666522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-73555947225408296002007-11-06T18:16:00.000-06:002007-11-06T18:16:00.000-06:00Good read, bunnygirl. Creepy story with an "Indian...Good read, bunnygirl. Creepy story with an "Indiana Jones" feel about it and a well-done, intriguing ending. <BR/><BR/>BillBill Fullertonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16519204136462946444noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-17195382042141603442007-10-30T22:55:00.000-05:002007-10-30T22:55:00.000-05:00Wow, Bunnygirl -- chill bumps again. Chilling, po...Wow, Bunnygirl -- chill bumps again. Chilling, powerful, and poignant.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com