tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post3685489058587771993..comments2023-05-11T09:40:38.634-05:00Comments on Writings: Flash Fiction Interlude: Revolutions Begin at HomeAnn (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-49459209266472216772012-09-11T15:35:52.424-05:002012-09-11T15:35:52.424-05:00As a pacifist, I take this whole story with a cert...As a pacifist, I take this whole story with a certain amusement, since living by the sword (or the semi-automatic...), well, you get the idea.<br /><br />Guess it never occurred to them to parlay. That would take brains! And rational words. Ah, so bleak their world! Peace, Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/09/11/comes-the-revolution-for-riley/Sharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-377474170293977962012-09-10T10:28:22.012-05:002012-09-10T10:28:22.012-05:00Easier to get rid of El Duque than to get those tw...Easier to get rid of El Duque than to get those two to get along.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-48392162073810306722012-09-10T10:06:14.739-05:002012-09-10T10:06:14.739-05:00Easier to get rid of El Duque than to get those tw...Easier to get rid of El Duque than to get those two to get along.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-21326336821247425962012-09-10T09:07:41.582-05:002012-09-10T09:07:41.582-05:00a criminal enterprise, intent, first. on the enjoy...a criminal enterprise, intent, first. on the enjoyment of the fight, and later, the actual revolution to come...loved the quickness of the dialogue - held interest til the very end...joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-19735646047598044442012-09-09T18:07:28.931-05:002012-09-09T18:07:28.931-05:00Aligning oneself with outlaws, criminals and malco...Aligning oneself with outlaws, criminals and malcontents is fine but we are just playing aren't we? We like the talk, we like the provocation and anticipate the action but someone (Vince) has to use a measure of commonsense. Being able to visualize the characters shows the strength in this writing and has us baying for more.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-3673961300028311642012-09-09T12:31:30.136-05:002012-09-09T12:31:30.136-05:00I was chuckling huskily throughout this..the dialo...I was chuckling huskily throughout this..the dialogue is as sharp as stolen liquor..stealth is always the key..and would love to be Three..she is a sparky one..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-69971950424354080062012-09-09T11:39:44.736-05:002012-09-09T11:39:44.736-05:00I really like your writing style. It's quick, ...I really like your writing style. It's quick, it flows, the thoughts mesh well with the dialogue and the dialogue itself is faultless and easy. Nothing seems contrived. Great blog, I'll have to check out Diana's Diary too. Happy Sunday!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17245199686136573125noreply@blogger.com