tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post8340299061899718013..comments2023-05-11T09:40:38.634-05:00Comments on Writings: Flash Fiction Interlude: The Afternoon BoyfriendAnn (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-14839160463312987002014-03-31T16:44:42.465-05:002014-03-31T16:44:42.465-05:00Ah, an out take. I remember this from the diaries...Ah, an out take. I remember this from the diaries.Alice Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00493000223984649409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-62392281958978121892008-02-18T19:07:00.000-06:002008-02-18T19:07:00.000-06:00Your stories read effortlessly; that must take a l...Your stories read effortlessly; that must take a lot of work! There is an evenness and smoothness to the structure, a stride if you will, that makes this piece, and your others, just flow for the reader.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-51810801552732666802008-02-18T18:19:00.000-06:002008-02-18T18:19:00.000-06:00Yep, I remember this scene! Loved it, too; it's pr...Yep, I remember this scene! Loved it, too; it's proof that not all humans are evil and horrible people with rape and murder on their minds.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-8157979379740507402008-02-16T01:33:00.000-06:002008-02-16T01:33:00.000-06:00I haven't read your book, but this snippet definit...I haven't read your book, but this snippet definitely has me interested! You've got me wondering about Diana and her travels and what's in Chicago... <BR/><BR/>~KatKathleen Oxleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12679658114758708843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-46845701852485118302008-02-14T20:23:00.000-06:002008-02-14T20:23:00.000-06:00I've just started your book so, like Thomma, I hav...I've just started your book so, like Thomma, I haven't gotten to this part yet. <BR/><BR/>I really enjoyed this, and I understand Diana. It's amazing how people can bond quickly and intensely ... and then it's gone. I was kind of hoping Diana would get some. ;) But the ending she had to this interlude seemed perfect for her, and on to another adventure. <BR/><BR/>Well done!AlannahJoyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15458416463383853840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-55844405164202361452008-02-14T11:30:00.000-06:002008-02-14T11:30:00.000-06:00I love your descriptions, the sharp taste of chees...I love your descriptions, the sharp taste of cheese and the smooth whiskey. Looking forward to reading more of your book.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-87746067141955470082008-02-14T10:14:00.000-06:002008-02-14T10:14:00.000-06:00I'm glad there will be whiskey in post-collapse Am...I'm glad there will be whiskey in post-collapse America.Quicktionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11366510098770744332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-70570802231342213482007-11-10T00:43:00.000-06:002007-11-10T00:43:00.000-06:00Auntie Bunnygirl, you are a wonderful writer!Auntie Bunnygirl, you are a wonderful writer!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-81741858088240273662007-11-09T14:05:00.000-06:002007-11-09T14:05:00.000-06:00Yes, Thomma, you do make sense, and it was.Yes, Thomma, you do make sense, and it was.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-44126050179234671532007-11-06T16:37:00.000-06:002007-11-06T16:37:00.000-06:00Ah, I haven't yet gotten to that part of My New-Fo...Ah, I haven't yet gotten to that part of <I>My New-Found Land</I> -- I'm sorry I'm so slow reading these days -- it isn't that I'm not loving your book, because I am; it is wonderful, a real treat. I'm kind of settling more into the NaNo groove, though, so hopefully, I'll be able to move faster. :)<BR/><BR/>I love this snippet. So poignant, and reflective of life on the road -- how deep connections can be forged and felt, then severed in a way, but in another way never truly severed, if I'm making any sense at all.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com