tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post6307993668432810769..comments2023-05-11T09:40:38.634-05:00Comments on Writings: Outtake #1Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-36985883125213672592013-09-10T21:04:49.698-05:002013-09-10T21:04:49.698-05:00I love the way they look at Coyotte's attitude...I love the way they look at Coyotte's attitude toward train destruction.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-81415382916668444552007-04-05T19:53:00.000-05:002007-04-05T19:53:00.000-05:00I think removing this was a good idea. Even though...I think removing this was a good idea. Even though it reads really well and holds the attention, you're right -- it's not moving the story forward in a way that you can't do elsewhere. <BR/><BR/>Good call!Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.com