tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post3163367560318794470..comments2023-05-11T09:40:38.634-05:00Comments on Writings: Flash Fiction Interlude: Practical Tracking (A Will and Diana Adventure)Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-16661382795612758522011-08-18T20:05:13.077-05:002011-08-18T20:05:13.077-05:00I thought for sure it was a barrel of whiskey he w...I thought for sure it was a barrel of whiskey he was leading them to.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-960993146510400252011-08-18T01:38:39.754-05:002011-08-18T01:38:39.754-05:00As soon as the prints got smaller it was clear the...As soon as the prints got smaller it was clear they were on the wrong (right) track. The value of their efforts far excelled the others. Coyote is clearly useful to have around even though a bit frustrating.<br />Excellent read.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-22344610670131795862011-08-17T15:43:33.029-05:002011-08-17T15:43:33.029-05:00Not a problem. I understood it all real well. We ...Not a problem. I understood it all real well. We used to do similar in Scouts. I enjoy your story a lot. Thank you.<br />Kwee<br /><a href="http://kweewritings.wordpress.com/" rel="nofollow">My FlashFiction here</a><br />and <a href="http://akweelife.wordpress.com/" rel="nofollow">"Nameless" serial here</a>.Kwee Cats and Arthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16650228469037436925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-59579526368505016772007-10-19T05:32:00.000-05:002007-10-19T05:32:00.000-05:00I'm going to buy the download for now, and even th...I'm going to buy the download for now, and even then I can't get it until the first of November. But I can't wait!Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05778854020957942903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-16619488436208282852007-10-18T10:15:00.000-05:002007-10-18T10:15:00.000-05:00Michael, I added the link for the book to the uppe...Michael, I added the link for the book to the upper right corner. It's a much cleaner version of Book One of my Diana's Diary fiction blog, and in a print or pdf format, it's now easier to read, in addition to being better edited. Don't be fooled by the page count-- it's illustrated!<BR/><BR/>If you buy it in either print or download, let me know so you can be included in the next drawing.Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-27905732900063561492007-10-18T09:16:00.000-05:002007-10-18T09:16:00.000-05:00I understood it. Once again, beautiful work. Kee...I understood it. Once again, beautiful work. Keep it up!<BR/><BR/>By the way, I thought you've mentioned something about people "buying your book." I'd very much like to buy it myself, but I don't know the title, or where to find it, or anything.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05778854020957942903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-58996282616916279782007-10-16T19:23:00.000-05:002007-10-16T19:23:00.000-05:00Diana's statement was meant in a figurative way. ...Diana's statement was meant in a figurative way. <BR/><BR/>It was a practice session, as noted by the comments about the other teams doing better and how the new tracks wouldn't lead them to the note that would tell them where to get their lunch. <BR/><BR/>But coming across someone in need and performing a real-life rescue will give them bragging rights. They didn't finish the exercise, but they did a good deed.<BR/><BR/>I'll be curious if anyone else was confused. Having done an exercise very similar to this last spring (with the exception of actually rescuing anyone) it's all very clear and obvious in my mind. But if I didn't make it obvious in my writing, I might need to go back to the drawing board!Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-10436245968253568682007-10-16T19:13:00.000-05:002007-10-16T19:13:00.000-05:00Did they win? What was at stake?Did they win? What was at stake?Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.com