tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post3156925796861205984..comments2023-05-11T09:40:38.634-05:00Comments on Writings: Flash Fiction Interlude: Dark Places(A 'Will and Diana' Adventure)Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-16616916783347128382014-03-06T16:29:58.045-06:002014-03-06T16:29:58.045-06:00Boy, those last lines have so much extra weight wh...Boy, those last lines have so much extra weight when you know how it all ends up.Alice Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00493000223984649409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-3590687741026124732007-10-13T09:17:00.000-05:002007-10-13T09:17:00.000-05:00Another good one, woman!! (yeah, I'm a bit behind....Another good one, woman!! (yeah, I'm a bit behind. To say I've been utterly swamped would be an understatement!)Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-58535816883286609072007-10-12T01:25:00.000-05:002007-10-12T01:25:00.000-05:00Thanks for the comments, Michael and Thomma! I th...Thanks for the comments, Michael and Thomma! I thought about holding this piece until closer to Halloween, which would've allowed for more editing time, but I was worried I'd get lazy. Trying to "write short" is challenging for me and it's something that I think will improve my writing overall as I get better at it.<BR/><BR/>And thanks for stopping by, kitties! Pixel is too shy to play with you, but Tidbit says come by anytime-- she loves new friends!Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-44427533921323237022007-10-11T23:50:00.000-05:002007-10-11T23:50:00.000-05:00Wowie, Aunt Bunnygirl! Furry good story, and I ef...Wowie, Aunt Bunnygirl! Furry good story, and I efun got kinda skeered. I wanted to climb up my momma's leg like a tree! hehehe<BR/><BR/>Kittyhugs and purrs from MaoMao!MaoMaohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628201299256431990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-61762116698133343512007-10-10T16:16:00.000-05:002007-10-10T16:16:00.000-05:00You are a very talented writer, Aunt Bunnygirl! *s...You are a very talented writer, Aunt Bunnygirl! *smile*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-69211954554493587662007-10-10T13:32:00.000-05:002007-10-10T13:32:00.000-05:00I loved how the man actually surprised me. I had ...I loved how the man actually surprised me. I had thought he might be up to something, but I didn't expect this! And the dialogue, the man's pleading and protests ... it was eerie. I could almost feel as if I were actually in Will or Diana's place, feeling the emotions drip from his eyes and voice...<BR/><BR/>Beautiful piece, Bunnygirl!Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05778854020957942903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25705418.post-42893261520564268972007-10-10T03:03:00.000-05:002007-10-10T03:03:00.000-05:00Wow, what a piece -- gave me the shivers. Excelle...Wow, what a piece -- gave me the shivers. Excellent work, Bunnygirl. I loved Will's protectiveness, his matter-of-fact attitude; Diana's down-to-earth introspection... both of them strong in the face of dark places and a future of uncertainty.<BR/><BR/>Guess what -- I started <I>My New-Found Land</I> last night, and I'm loving it. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com